Main Task - Audience Feedback

Last week, Naomi and I presented a pitch to the rest of the group about our idea for our video. Below is the video of this.

Doing this pitch was, in fact, very helpful. It gave us an insight into what everyone thought of our idea, and the same ideas kept cropping up - there weren't enough editing and visual effects. The group seemed to like our idea, and agreed that it fitted very well in terms of Goodwin's Theory, and the style of the song.

We have taken their advice into consideration, and now feel that with a few editorial tweaks, we can make this the best it can possibly be. These will become apparent with the final storyboard.

Below are six pieces of feedback we received, listing what was good about our pitch, and what we need to improve.

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